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HelpDot Documentation ReviewOverall AssessmentThis PR makes a single, minor wording change to the Book-a-Flight article. The change modifies one bullet point under the "What happens after booking with Expensify Travel" section, replacing "after booking" with "that includes the relevant booking details" in the confirmation email bullet. The change adds specificity about what the confirmation email contains. Scores Summary
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A preview of your ExpensifyHelp changes have been deployed to https://58c18ac3.helpdot.pages.dev ⚡️ Updated articles: |
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@stephanieelliott looks like this was merged without a test passing. Please add a note explaining why this was done and remove the |
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| - Your company’s travel policy may require approval before final confirmation. | ||
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The changed line itself looks good -- no governance violations.
However, this file has several pre-existing issues worth addressing (not introduced by this PR):
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#heading (line 20):# How to book a flightshould be## How to book a flight-- only one#heading (the article title) is allowed, plus the optional# FAQ. (HELP_AUTHORING_GUIDELINES.md Section 4) -
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## What happens after booking with Expensify Traveldoes not start with a question word applied to the user. Consider:## What happens after you book with Expensify Travel. (HELP_AUTHORING_GUIDELINES.md Section 2) -
Full URLs instead of relative links (lines 17, 51): Cross-links must use relative paths, not full URLs like
https://help.expensify.com/...orhttps://docs.expensify.com. (HELP_AUTHORING_GUIDELINES.md Section 7) -
Link inside numbered steps (line 17): The link to enable Expensify Travel appears adjacent to navigation steps. Links should not be placed inside procedural step instructions. (HELP_AUTHORING_GUIDELINES.md Section 7)
HelpDot Documentation ReviewOverall AssessmentThis PR makes a single, minor wording improvement to the "What happens after booking" section. The change replaces a vague statement ("after booking") with a more informative one ("that includes the relevant booking details"), which adds specificity for the reader. The change itself is clean and appropriate. Scores Summary (for the proposed change only)
Key FindingsThe proposed change is solid. It replaces a vague bullet with a more descriptive one, aligning with the governance principle of being explicit and avoiding vague phrasing. Pre-existing issues in the full file (not introduced by this PR):
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